Saturday, September 7, 2013

Here is my diary entry For chapter 8 of MN!

Dear Diary,
           
        Today the most spectacular thing happened! Diggory and I (along with a few other fellas) appeared to be in this sort of "empty world'' as the witch called it. We were lucky enough to see this "empty world" become a real world! The creation of this new world, which is very unlike I would suppose a new world would form, was stupendous! At first we were in darkness, and we thought that we were, perhaps, dead. But, soon a marvelous voice arouse from the distance, singing without tune or words, yet so beautifully or jaws dropped to the floor! Before you could marvel at its brilliance, millions of big twinkly stars appeared in the sky! Planets too, so much bigger and closer than any in our world! As the voice continued, you could see hills and valleys begin to form. But the best part of all, was when the young, bright, golden sun rose behind these new-born hills. It was amazing to watch the rest of this world be born at my feet. I will write at soon as possible!

                                                                   With Love,
                                                                       Polly
               

11 comments:

  1. Did you have any "thought bubbles" as you watched? Did you feel anything? It does sound so marvelous.

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  2. Great job! Nice wording! Loved the font.

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  3. Nice wording! Wouldn't it be fun to actually see that?

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  4. Love the way you wrote. It made feel like I was there.

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  5. I really like how you worded this. Good job! =)

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  6. I really like your choice. I picked Polly too.

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  7. Great wording! I like the fact that you said "...as the Witch called it."

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